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雨夜站台与掉落的信封

剧情故事 · Seedance 2.0 · ORHAN ·

一条结构清晰的 15 秒四段式提示词,带分段标签(铺垫、紧张、转折、结尾)、焦点转移、慢动作掉落,以及详细的 Look、Audio、Text 和 Avoid 字段,很适合当作无对白短剧的模板。

原视频预览帧:雨夜站台与掉落的信封

提示词

A 15-second vertical 9:16 cinematic story scene, 24fps, shot on 35mm anamorphic look, moody and emotional. 0-3s (setup): Night, a quiet empty railway platform in light rain. A young man in a long coat stands alone holding an old envelope, breath visible in the cold air. Slow dolly-in from behind him. 3-7s (tension): Close-up on his face as he looks at the envelope, then up at a distant train light growing through the fog. His hands tremble slightly. Rack focus from the envelope to his eyes. 7-11s (turn): The train arrives with a rush of wind. His coat and hair whip sideways. He hesitates, then lets the envelope slip from his fingers onto the wet platform. Slow motion, droplets in the air. 11-15s (ending): The doors open, warm yellow light spills onto his face. He steps in without looking back. Camera holds on the envelope on the platform as the train pulls away, then fades to black. Look: Teal and amber color grade, deep shadows, soft practical lighting, fine film grain, shallow depth of field. Audio: Soft rain, distant train rumble building, a single sustained piano note at the train's arrival, silence at the final fade. No dialogue. Text: None. Language: No speech and no on-screen text, so no language issues. Avoid: Warped hands, distorted faces, flicker, garbled text, watermarks, extra limbs.

分镜拆解

主体
夜晚下着小雨的空旷火车站台上,一位穿长风衣、手拿旧信封的年轻男子。
动作
他看着信封,看到列车进站,任信封掉在湿漉漉的站台上,头也不回地上车,镜头留在信封上。
镜头
从身后缓慢推近,特写时焦点从信封转到他的眼睛,掉落时用慢动作,信封上定格一会儿再渐黑。
风格
35mm 变形宽银幕质感,青橙调色,深阴影,实用光源和胶片颗粒。
声音
雨声、逐渐逼近的列车轰鸣、列车到站时一声悠长的钢琴音,渐黑时归于寂静,没有对白。

推荐参数

模型
Seedance 2.0
时长
15 秒
画幅
9:16
分辨率
1080p

改成你自己的

  • 四段加起来正好 15 秒,也是 Seedance 2.0 的上限;想缩短就删掉 3-7 秒的紧张段,直接进入列车到站。
  • 「Text」和「Language」两行是为了避免出现乱码字幕;换成别的故事时也建议保留。
  • 换故事时可以把信封换成别的物件,但要保留「rack focus」和「slow motion droplets」,它们决定了情绪落点。

来源与许可

作者
ORHAN
许可证
CC BY 4.0
改动说明
Makernice 补充了效果说明、分镜拆解、推荐参数与改写建议,并删去了原帖中含链接或 @提及的整行、纯话题标签行与推文串回复;其余提示词文字未作改动。

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